## Am In Red Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## Am In Red

Rating: 3.7


[inspired from a mail from MR. SHANMUGHAM CHETTIAR}

am i in green
a smooth sail in car on road
no hindrance between

am i in yellow
feeling like stupid fellow
not sure what to do

am i stopped in red
yes i am and stranded
with a feel of dread

yet....yet....

yet i have not lost
hope on this humanity
a god given one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yelena M. 14 August 2009

colourful inspirations.. well-crafted piece, thanks for sharing :) A.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 August 2009

There always is hope.

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Ency Bearis 14 August 2009

nice write...a good simile poem...

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Louis Rams 13 August 2009

life like traffic lights, has times to go, times to slow, and times to stop in your tracks, for there'll be no turning back. good write a ten

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Ravi A 13 August 2009

'am i stopped in red yes i am and stranded with a feel of dread'- communists can easily misquote these lines and the poet can be in trouble! Similies can land a poet into trouble.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 August 2009

In life we face all colors representing some feeling, some expression. In paining, especially in modern painting, colors are used to denote a particular expression or feeling or even a particular condition of the subject painted. This is a very expressive and colorful poem.

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Raj Arumugam 21 August 2009

nice play and feel of words and ideas

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Sandhya S N 20 August 2009

very nice flow of words with a lot of hidden meanings regards sandhya

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 August 2009

a very nice theme... flows with creative and brilliant ideas very motivating piece...inspiring whatever we've gone through...we should not lose hope... very meaningful, Sam... 10++++ lovelots, Maia

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

You write well indeed dear sam sir! ! ! ! ! ! And you are very creative when it comes to writing poems.... raw talent I should say...... your work always impress me, because I am never being good at being short and concise.. you say a lot in the most creative way.... good 10++ lovess shan

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