[inspired from a mail from MR. SHANMUGHAM CHETTIAR}
am i in green
a smooth sail in car on road
no hindrance between
am i in yellow
feeling like stupid fellow
not sure what to do
am i stopped in red
yes i am and stranded
with a feel of dread
yet....yet....
yet i have not lost
hope on this humanity
a god given one
life like traffic lights, has times to go, times to slow, and times to stop in your tracks, for there'll be no turning back. good write a ten
'am i stopped in red yes i am and stranded with a feel of dread'- communists can easily misquote these lines and the poet can be in trouble! Similies can land a poet into trouble.
In life we face all colors representing some feeling, some expression. In paining, especially in modern painting, colors are used to denote a particular expression or feeling or even a particular condition of the subject painted. This is a very expressive and colorful poem.
very nice flow of words with a lot of hidden meanings regards sandhya
a very nice theme... flows with creative and brilliant ideas very motivating piece...inspiring whatever we've gone through...we should not lose hope... very meaningful, Sam... 10++++ lovelots, Maia
You write well indeed dear sam sir! ! ! ! ! ! And you are very creative when it comes to writing poems.... raw talent I should say...... your work always impress me, because I am never being good at being short and concise.. you say a lot in the most creative way.... good 10++ lovess shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
colourful inspirations.. well-crafted piece, thanks for sharing :) A.