[inspired from a mail from MR. SHANMUGHAM CHETTIAR}
am i in green
a smooth sail in car on road
no hindrance between
am i in yellow
feeling like stupid fellow
not sure what to do
am i stopped in red
yes i am and stranded
with a feel of dread
yet....yet....
yet i have not lost
hope on this humanity
a god given one
good poem SLN...there is a good message; a revelation that we recognize at onetime or other in our life journey...thematic...well conveyed...10
the poem came out nicely to be greater than a piece of thought from me. have you read my The concept of the soul? shan
A comparison of day to day life with the three traffic signals is excellent.
You have explained the stop go of life so very well. From time to time we should all see a orange light, so we can pause and return to now. 10+ Bob
In life we face all colors representing some feeling, some expression. In paining, especially in modern painting, colors are used to denote a particular expression or feeling or even a particular condition of the subject painted. This is a very expressive and colorful poem.
very nice flow of words with a lot of hidden meanings regards sandhya
a very nice theme... flows with creative and brilliant ideas very motivating piece...inspiring whatever we've gone through...we should not lose hope... very meaningful, Sam... 10++++ lovelots, Maia
You write well indeed dear sam sir! ! ! ! ! ! And you are very creative when it comes to writing poems.... raw talent I should say...... your work always impress me, because I am never being good at being short and concise.. you say a lot in the most creative way.... good 10++ lovess shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
inspirations can make for great writes 10