## Am In Red Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## Am In Red

Rating: 3.7


[inspired from a mail from MR. SHANMUGHAM CHETTIAR}

am i in green
a smooth sail in car on road
no hindrance between

am i in yellow
feeling like stupid fellow
not sure what to do

am i stopped in red
yes i am and stranded
with a feel of dread

yet....yet....

yet i have not lost
hope on this humanity
a god given one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 10 August 2009

inspirations can make for great writes 10

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Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2009

good poem SLN...there is a good message; a revelation that we recognize at onetime or other in our life journey...thematic...well conveyed...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 August 2009

the poem came out nicely to be greater than a piece of thought from me. have you read my The concept of the soul? shan

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 August 2009

A comparison of day to day life with the three traffic signals is excellent.

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Bob Blackwell 12 August 2009

You have explained the stop go of life so very well. From time to time we should all see a orange light, so we can pause and return to now. 10+ Bob

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 August 2009

In life we face all colors representing some feeling, some expression. In paining, especially in modern painting, colors are used to denote a particular expression or feeling or even a particular condition of the subject painted. This is a very expressive and colorful poem.

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Raj Arumugam 21 August 2009

nice play and feel of words and ideas

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Sandhya S N 20 August 2009

very nice flow of words with a lot of hidden meanings regards sandhya

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 August 2009

a very nice theme... flows with creative and brilliant ideas very motivating piece...inspiring whatever we've gone through...we should not lose hope... very meaningful, Sam... 10++++ lovelots, Maia

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

You write well indeed dear sam sir! ! ! ! ! ! And you are very creative when it comes to writing poems.... raw talent I should say...... your work always impress me, because I am never being good at being short and concise.. you say a lot in the most creative way.... good 10++ lovess shan

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