Ambrosia Poem by Crimson Love

Ambrosia

Rating: 5.0


A nectar of the gods,
Deeming mortals with immortality,
A fine spun gold of immortal divinity,
Lips touch the way of the gods,
and are brought to the gates of light,
Enlightened by the divine,
you take in the aroma,
it beckons such a deep kiss,
yet you remain the spectator for such godly bliss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 22 November 2011

'it beckons such a deep kiss, yet you remain the spectator for such godly bliss.' Hey! Hey! You are gifted with enormous talent and amazing brain to write poetry great.....

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Paul Butters 13 November 2011

Lovely poem. A touch of Tantalus.

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Unwritten Soul 12 November 2011

Sensational write, this quite different from you to me, but it still amazing spell...a crimson talent is conquering the dark :) More nice art Crimson, write more.._Unwritten Soul

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