An Element Of Surprise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

An Element Of Surprise

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There is element of surprise
Even it is in sudden demise
Why does the sun always rise?
It can stay at home otherwise

So many things do happen or take place
They may prove disastrous even if you are not in race
You will have to deal it as fresh case
Not to loose the hope in any case

Is it not wonderful to be in this world?
All memories to be preserved and kept in fold
Why to worry about changing seasons?
It is varying from person to, person'

World may not end with our thinking
Thoughts may not stop with your sinking
You may drawn in sea or jump from sky
It will never end the question why

Try to be reasonable with simple fact
There is no use to offer resistance or to react
It may be your fate and must be accepted
Lines must be drawn choice must be opted

Future destiny makes you strong or weak
You should face the challenge and guidance to seek
You must stand alone in the lonely island
Must make it hospitable with many more friends

It may not bally your expectations
You may emerge powerful without any citation
It is your destiny and you must give shape
You should remain vigilant and never be trapped

Everything has its own time and future
It may rise and end with specific tenure
What are we thinking about future trend?
Try to adjust and make some mends

Have you ever ventured in hot sun?
Have you ever tried for shelter and run?
If not, then leave it for future option
Answer should not found before arrival of question


We get perturbed over slight setback
We don’t address it but make role back
Why do we think it as permanent tragedy?
Can we not laugh it out and make it as comedy?

Nothing comes out of despair or hope
Sometimes you may have to walk on tight rope
God has given us strength to change the direction
Go with firm determination and resolute action

Time may come when you will not look back
People will follow you for guidance and ask
It will be your finest hour to rejoice
You may be able to utter with strong voice

Wait for the day and time till it knocks your door
You must simply acknowledge and don’t try for
It has to come one day and make you smile
You may face the positive world when walk for while

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Oconnell 05 March 2010

you certainly know this world and life. great optimism.john

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A powerful perspective my friend. Keep up the good works.

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 March 2010

'Nothing comes out of despair or hope Sometimes you may have to walk on tight rope God has given us strength to change the direction Go with firm determination and resolute action..' Well said here. A strong perspective poem. Well done. Enjoyed reading it

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Gul naz 07 March 2010

Nothing comes out of despair or hope Sometimes you may have to walk on tight rope God has given us strength to change the direction Go with firm determination and resolute action ! ! ! i loved these lines

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Great poem, i give you 9 per cent.Just great

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Mark Nwagwu 15 March 2010

this write touches all the bases of human experience and the vagaries of life. Great, my friend; simply great. Surprise, surprise, that is certain!

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Sahar Sahar 15 March 2010

there are surprises to bulge out of the amazement when things get unusual with suddenness......very interesting write 10+++++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 March 2010

Every thing has an optimum time … but we must not keep our fingers crossed … Tamas Gunha people may take it as a plea … work out weak up be in vibe of own’s faith … ‘Virr Bhogya Vasundhara’ only courageous enjoy world … As usual punch of edu …in it with moral aesthetics … thanks Sir… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Elena Sandu 11 March 2010

A ten plus ten smiles for the lovely surprise! Thank you!

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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

A lovely poem... I agree most heartidly...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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