AN OPEN MESSAGE
For poet poet himself
All about my true invitation
and your brave adaptation
Dear poet poet, sir
I´ll treat you here
delicious ginger-ale cocktail, no beer
but never shake, just stir
Here I cite your precious words,
your addition with some rendition
to my poem submission
An Essay Poem about Love, not ´bout birds
you said
that sounded truly sad
amongst other,
please don´t bother
poet poet, he said these important words to me, to us all:
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YOU DID WELL TO INVITE ME
BUT I SEE YOU HAVE NOT ACKNOWLEDGED ANY ONE
SAD SEE YOU MAY BE COUNTING STARS
18 HERE AT LEAST
SO BE happy poetess ye be
thank everyone will now ye
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his Comment (here above) you can read this in my poem
AN ESSAY POEM ABOUT LOVE - by Sylvia Frances Chan-
Mom´s child oft wild,
which stars do you mean?
on the Southern hemisphere
or on the Northern stratosphere?
or just around your misty atmosphere
you know, there are too many stars
especially, now during these cold wars
SO BE content poet poet ye be
thank everyone will now me....
I reckon the best interpreted
by the poet poet himself, that´s it!
please, do enjoy, these words are from my wall
you have had fun,
I´ll stand my tall
sure this is no pun
Dear God, if Thou permit me
like Hiskia, i present Thee
this is all about poet poet, he be....
P.S. I had been thinking a few days to submit this or not
and I put this to the Lord´s feet like Hiskia ever did,
so this OPEN MESSAGE is now here posted,
the best wishes from
©Sylvia Frances Chan
Enjoyed this poetic conversation between a poet and a poetess. Both are my lovely friends.
Poet Poet very often reads my poems... Some of his comments doesn't suit to me but I take it friendly! However, when he comments on poems of ladies he must follow decency! Hope he will improve.. Pl give him a chance!
An open message from a great heart for a great heart..... thanks
Thank you for your most sympathetic comment and dear compliment. God Bless you in Abundance
Thank you for your most sympathetic comment and dear compliment. God Bless you in Abundance.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem....it is a open expression of your talent... You are really a genius.... I do love and respect Sir Poet poet...He is a spontaneous bard..... However I enjoyed this poem very much for your creative faculty.. thanks 100000000+++++++
Thank you so much for the 100000000+++++++thanks. Thank YOU, Prabir dear. My elder bro is a real genius, not I, dear poet, but I know you are a good person, the most sympathetic poet friend and a very talented poet too. Your visit I regard precious. Thank you for the response and the compliments.