# # An Unplanned Journey Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # An Unplanned Journey

Rating: 4.1


no travel agent
no travel schedule
no tickets taken
no luggage packed there in
no money taken even
no idea where am goin
no plans of destination even
no....going is not my decision even

like a child
pulled out of it's play
by its parent
i walk along
leaving behind..
...my body

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 02 July 2009

A soul write indeed. Strength for the journey, my friend.10+. Warm regards, Sandra

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Seema Aarella 30 June 2009

Amazing write....apt thoughts and descriptions...we all do so many things by obligation of duty without applying our soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Really a good read...Thanks!

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Joseph Poewhit 29 June 2009

Like pulling a tree out of the ground. - NOTHING

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Raj Arumugam 29 June 2009

an exciting journey...an out-of body experience?

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2009

No plans best idea...live and enjoy no plans only insurance life is beautiful .a....10 regards...

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Ranjit Ravindran 18 October 2009

that final journey.....some anxiously await it...some fear it...some don't even bother... whatever be the case the journey has to be taken for once and for ever.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009

you bring out well the message on meaning of life...thanks...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 July 2009

very soulful write... When we travel towards our 'main' destination... leaving our body behind us...very touching..very true.. very nice write Sam... maia

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Meggie Gultiano 07 July 2009

and i want to add this, Sam..We are nothing.Somewhere, you left a message and this is very powerful for me..I love this

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Very profound and different samanyan. Our imaginations can take us wherever we want to go. 10 Karin Anderson

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