Ancestry.Com Poem by Callie Carroll

Ancestry.Com

Rating: 4.8


You returned from the North with good news-
Little Thomas and John found
in the sheltering arms of Protestant parents,
allowing your family tree to remain stately and strong.
Arduously researched, meticulously inked
a mighty shelter, whose roots firmly anchor you.

My bad news, a family tree in disarray-
A gamy stew of Missouri horse thieves, seductive wenches,
and a noisy mob with a thirst they cannot explain.
Artists without canvases, poets without paper,
and singers of curiously strident tunes
(which i croon in secret at night) .
From no place in particular
following a crooked path
to who knows where,
grateful to be there
upon arrival.

Sunday, August 10, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: family,heritage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Part is true, part is poet musings....They really did find the lost boys though.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 10 August 2008

Callie, you have a magnificent turn of phrase in juxtaposing refined lineage with the robust and rambunctious heritage of proud self-seekers. Excellent poem. Rgds, Ivan

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Marieta Maglas 11 August 2011

''a crooked path to nowhere''- and family tree-in the missing of faith-well expressed poem.

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Bill Thomas 17 January 2009

Yes! ! Rejoice in the roughness, the un-neatness of real people...

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Scarlett Treat 11 August 2008

I had to laugh and laugh when I read this one! I enjoyed it tremendously! ! I come from just such a widely diverse family 'tree, ' and I, too, was on the rough side, so your tree fit my foot exactly! ! Great writing, looking forward to reading more!

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 August 2008

Such are family trees. None exactly the same; but each, upon looking, shall find a king and a scoundrel. For none are pure. Do not lament your own. Only fear the pride of one above others. GW62

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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 August 2008

seductively beautiful. good one callista.

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