Ancient Struggle Poem by Carolyn Brunelle

Ancient Struggle

Rating: 4.9


Another age old story
seventeen years of nurturing
yearns to be free.

A sense of entitlement reigns,
not a particularly new game
just an eternal rite of passage.

Little angel
you have grown strong, bold;
your heart dismissive and cold.
Where are you going?

Once a babe in our arms
now distant; so disarming,
a little girl no more
storms out the door....

Where are you taking our hearts?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

When to love and hold And when to let go We parents never learn When our kids turn bold But outside that door It is a harsh world And this the child will learn The way we too did before returning home..... Good poem and I welcome you to my page too

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Alistair Graham 16 December 2013

Where are you taking our hearts? Will you return the fragile gifts or should we believe it is right for them to continue in dual residence?

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Paul Anthony 16 December 2012

They going where we all went when we fled the nest, to live their own lives and then become us. Still, smashing little poem, sums up a lot of things we all have been through and if we're lucky we'll watch our children go through the same thing. Don't you just love being alive!

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Ronn Michael Salinas 16 December 2012

They tell you to be a nurse.

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Valerie Dohren 16 December 2012

Yes, they walk away, but they usually walk back again when they have found their way as mature and responsible adults, which is the way it should be. Good write Carolyn.

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Kim Barney 16 December 2014

Great poem and fitting title. Wonderfully expressed.

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John Richter 16 December 2014

An age old story..... Losing a child at adulthood is harder than raising them

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 December 2014

Abrupt so abrupt- Where are you taking our hearts? very nice- congrats

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Brian Johnston 22 December 2013

Makes me wish I had a child to write poems about...Bon Voyage. A definite 10! I'll definitely back for more. For a different take on a childless life still worth living check me out Carolyn.

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Kim Wood 17 December 2013

Wow, I'm going through this struggle right now Carolyn. I never read something that was so close to the issue before. A lot of people don't really discuss what its like to have a child that used to admire you, love to be around you, then become 17 and a stranger that doesn't seem to have any desire to be around me at all. I didn't realize how much it would affect me. I guess I'm not the only one.

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