And Some Comments On A Poem....... Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

And Some Comments On A Poem.......

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o for the fruits
the allured mind
became crazy
to enjoy saintly, sagely, wisely
in secret dome (without any doom) ,
but lusty came thoroughly

cause
the fruits were not the apple!
these were apple like woman limbs!

think,
think it deeply
there were none
without the man and the woman,
but the woman limbs (apple like)allured
to its beneath peaceful mysterious hole...
and the man limbs (snakelike)desired to enjoy

according to the tale, so-called godly books
the tree of the fruits was forbidden!
By the scheme of the snake
The man and the woman were trapped!
no! no!
maybe yes! no, maybe no!
think again and imagine
the forbidden tree of the fruits was none or nothing
it was the woman body! !
In a manly sense, God banned to go to woman body!

Cause, as our belief-
God is masculine totalitarianism Almighty!
as our belief
God is the creator of the entire universe (in a masculine sense)

from the very beginning
God (maybe)wanted
manly sense would enjoy the authoritarianism on the woman
and woman always would live
in the subjugation slavery sense!

the snake always enjoyed all
in a masculine sense;
where the fruits used to be the as feminine sense

when the snake enjoyed its living place
the hole started to conceive some into its vacuity for the snake happiness;

OH! but God felt very angry on these prohibited activities
Cause, in heaven
creation was only the performance of God

the man and woman performed wisely together against God's prohibition
and opened the doors of the knowledge of this earth;

though freedom of man and woman came together equally
yet; the woman used to live under the dictatorship of man
(for the sake of so-called godly books, in fear of sin or hell punishments)
cause; the snake holder man is very shrewd to rule over the tree of fruits holder woman body! ! !




-July 06-07,2019 Chattogram

Monday, July 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,blind,god,man,slavery,snake,social injustice,sovereignty,woman,womanhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from my comment on 1302 They Said Be Mature So I Was - Poem by me poet yeps poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 29 December 2020

A realistic approach, a thoughtful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 July 2019

read me not never mind out of sight outta one's mind ur a poet one of a kind MB OF BD 4 me still

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2019

Man ruling over woman! ! " Snake holder man" . Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jane Campion 08 July 2019

Morality in the scriptures are metaphors used in the play. Each actor has a part. The omnipotent God took the lead role. Seen in this sense we should enjoy each scene.

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