Dr. Antony Theodore


And The Moon Smiled - Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

In tiptoeing tiny steps
I came to you
to pluck your soul.

You found me, hugged,
kissed, squeezed my lips.

Then..
plucked your soul to give me
and the moon smiled.

(True love experience is always a mystery.
“The smile of the moon” - the mild golden light of the moon that falls in the garden on the riverbanks was always mysterious for me) .

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty


Comments about And The Moon Smiled by Dr. Antony Theodore

  • (1/6/2018 1:28:00 PM)


    Hmmm my favour theme the moon ...i like it 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Binayakumar Mohanty (10/22/2017 11:41:00 AM)


    I came to you to pluck your soul.Full of romanticism.Nicely crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden (2/19/2014 5:41:00 AM)


    Very beautiful poem then plucked your soul to give me and the moon smiled really terrific line
    Beautifully written and a lovely read well done to you
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  • Malini Kadir (1/19/2014 8:15:00 AM)


    very romantic..........touched the soul.... en route...... (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok (9/3/2010 1:29:00 AM)


    By personifying the Moon, you have portrayed a lovely picture of true love. (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok (9/3/2010 1:29:00 AM)


    By personifying the Moon, you have portrayed a lovely picture of true love. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2010 5:56:00 AM)


    and the moon smiled.

    a lovers moon, bringing the timid tiny footsteps
    of love to fruition, upon the lips of the beloved
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  • (8/27/2010 1:57:00 PM)


    Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation..more than deserving of tens.Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/26/2010 11:57:00 PM)


    Fantastic. Unique and a pure moonatic-poem (strictly not lunatic) . Beautiful imagery, its fragrance blowing high, its totality perhaps demands its place in the BEST LOVE POEM ARCHAIVE. If I stay here long perhaps my lunacy will make you disgusted since you need now the pure silence to suck every dropp of heavenly nectar. Beautiful and again it is magnificent.

    Regards,
    10+++++
    pranab
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 26, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 23, 2015


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