Angel (1) Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Angel (1)

Rating: 5.0


Oh, angel thy comeliness
Will bloom the flowers
Of my blue night.
Come unto my Palace!
As I'm the king
Of this blue night;
I'll sweep away all thy darkness.
Together we shall sing,
The unsung song of our soul
Together we will breathe,
The fragrance of those flowers-
Bloomed in our hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 05 January 2012

together we shall sing....very good line indeed......i like the poem very much...i enjoyed it throughly....you r a great poet

0 0 Reply
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 January 2012

a well found wish made in good words

0 0 Reply
Ken E Hall 05 January 2012

When she gets in the palace she will love you for this love poem very nice...regards

0 0 Reply
Nicky Hill 04 January 2012

stunning poem, words with meaning love it.

0 0 Reply
Hari Khabrani 30 December 2011

Lonliness fills someone special.

0 0 Reply
Minu Alex 11 January 2012

This is a really a nice one! Soft and tender thoughts!

0 0 Reply
Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Wow, wow, this is fantastic.......10***** Rose

0 0 Reply
Cristina Teodor 07 January 2012

You brought magic of a fairy night in such an amazing poem..Cristina Teodor

0 0 Reply
Tsira Gogeshvili 06 January 2012

Beautiful east motive Vipins...10... Thanks for the invitation. Tsira.

0 0 Reply
Narayanan Ramakrishnan 06 January 2012

The unsung song......bloomed in our hearts, brings out the magic of the peom. truly beautiful like flowers of love blooming in hearts. Narayanan.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success