I'm lying at the bottom
of the ocean devoid of breath
just waiting for death
Sea serpents and mutants all around me
watching and waiting
ready to feed off what's left
I see my spirit and soul
rise above me
my eyes are closing
to nothing but darkness
Then a bright light comes
and shatters the darkness
an angel appears and says
the ocean is not your resting place
your life is to be lived
now you rise and you rise
to the sound of the living
my eyes are closing to nothing but darkness, good write, thanks.10 I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.
Life is for living and not to be spent in the depths of despair. Very imaginative and clever write Dave.
I can truly say Amen to this great write Dave. An Angel of light appeared and rescued a soul from the pits of Hell. All kinds of spirits was waiting to take hold. This leads me to invite you to read my poem An Angel Just for Me. I am thankful that you shared this poem.
rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss**********************************
rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss**********************************
your life is to be lived now you rise and you rise to the sound of the living beautiful write.xlent. thnx for sharing. regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, you are right..never take life for granted..beautiful imagination..