Oh my goodness, oh gosh, there's one thing I fear,
going shopping with my wife, I'd prefer to stay near,
she's got her checklist, and she's determined,
to purchase unnecessary items, it's her obsession.
She'll browse for hours, and I'll become weary,
my feet will hurt and my tolerance dreary,
she'll try on clothes, and request my opinion,
but regardless of my response, it won't be genuine.
Therefore, heed my suggestion,
if you cherish your being
abstain from shopping with your partner,
it will only bring disagreeing.
O ho! Asim ji, this is the case with every lady. They love shopping and they are meticulous and choosy. Don't i know it, men generally are not fond of shopping......Hilarious poem. Enjoyed reading it......Top score + to my Favourite
Nice witty poem. It's true of all women. They like to spend hours on shopping. Whereas it's just the opposite with men.
your poetic expression about your partner made me smile; yes, true you are; sometimes I feel every woman is same; Almighty God made them from the same theme! nice to read you
line 2: 'near' ok. I think 'near home' is implied, away from the store and your wife's buying obsession. But I THINK your marriage is pretty safe....for now. bri : )
stanza 3: I love the 'being/disagreeing' rhyme and meaning. 'Being' here, I'm sure, refers to your 'self', your life, your whole existence
Ok, maybe you don't fear your wife per se [and I never use 'per se', as it is 'foreign' to me in more than one way, ....so my use may NOT be proper here], .... but that you fear being locked in the store after closing?
line 6: maybe 'be dreary'. Asim, your opinion won't be genuine? ! ! Don't tell me that your 'fear' of your wife trumps your natural tendency to be completely honest! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is fun to read your experience of shopping with your wife.