Appreciate Poem by Lyn Paul

Appreciate

Rating: 5.0


Shouldn't we appreciate
The lines on ones face
Can't we just accept
This is The human race

The beauty of
The colour of one's skin
Gradually we realise
Its accepting to not win

What a race we are
Throwing darts at each other
Disheartening this is
When love is bred from thy Mother

We are angry, Fighting, why,
We are all human beings
It is mind blowing to see.
.The disrespect of others
Its un human and it will be seen


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March,2021
Lyn Paul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 28 February 2021

I had better appreciate the lines on my own face... I keep getting more and more of them all the time!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 March 2021

Thats what i keep saying all the time. One love, one earth, one destiny, death.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2021

I'm alone but not lonely... appreciated... this one too!

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Kostas Lagos 28 February 2021

Our nature is to hate, our destination to love. Marvelous poem!

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David Wood 28 February 2021

Nicely penned Lyn, the human race is very un human at times. More so in the political arena. A good 5*

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

What a race we are Throwing darts at each other.....so true!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 May 2021

Wow bravo well said, this is one of your very best, crafted in a brill meaningful inspiring to compassion with pearls of wisdom indeed. Kudos the world ought to heed this.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 April 2021

So much more becomes possible when we think with our hearts. A wonderful poem!

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Captain Cur 04 April 2021

We must humble ourselves to a greater power and free ourselves of ego. No small feat, since we have different gods and beliefs. So then tolerance is the only key to unlock the conundrum!

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Captain Cur 04 April 2021

A humanizing and frustrating write! Can man and woman ever truly live in harmony with one another? I believe we first must learn to respect and cherish nature and the earth and truly understand our place in this world.

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