Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

Apprently I'Ve Offended You - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I'll crawl back to my hole
not wounded
but curious
questions bubble
but get distorted
in the strong wind of autumn
if you listen to them pop
you'll hear my
apology
floating in your direction.


Comments about Apprently I'Ve Offended You by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • (11/10/2015 9:31:00 AM)


    A short beautiful poem and meaningful write up. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/10/2015 4:12:00 AM)


    An unconditional apology in the form of a poem. Nice write.8 points. (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2005 9:09:00 PM)


    this is a very clever piece of writing, Eila. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 28, 2005



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