Aqua Flower Poem by Aqua Flower

Aqua Flower

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Her pedals are blue
Her current is deep
why do I wish at times to put Aqua Flower to sleep?
Am I frightened of what she would reveal?
all of this life she wants to conceal
she wants so much to be free
to have the life she dreams of
and finally be happy

Sunday, October 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,yearning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Aqua Flower was born Aquarias.Her given name at birth means flower.Aqua is the color in her heart....not quite blue.She has the vision of greener pastures.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 19 April 2020

Deep current of her sweet love! ! Longing for Sunshine love! To touch her lonely heart deeply. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2018

A RARE poetess only can reveal what she may intend to conceal lovely poetry tis indeed AQUA 222222 aqua..I always post a comment on every poet who on my does comment as not many have time to return very busy poets all are we composing our own inner heart felt poetry like AQUA JI

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 October 2018

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Sometimes we put limitations to ourselves that will hinder us from enjoying the things our heart desires. We must enjoy the wonders of existence. We can enjoy them if we have freedom. A well crafted write that many of us can relate to.10+++

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Aqua Flower 09 October 2018

Thank you dear poetess for your lovely comment about this poem and for commenting on the Note as well.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2018

The title of the poem Aqua Flower written by Aqua Flower attracts me to go through the poem. It is really a beautiful poem regarding freedom. I cite....she wants so much to be free to have the life she dreams of and finally be happy Thank you dear madam for sharing this lovely poem.10

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Carl Roussell 07 October 2018

Sometimes writing can reveal too much of the writer's heart; maybe it is the first step in realizing those dreams. A scary first step - but keep writing.

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