Her pedals are blue
Her current is deep
why do I wish at times to put Aqua Flower to sleep?
Am I frightened of what she would reveal?
all of this life she wants to conceal
she wants so much to be free
to have the life she dreams of
and finally be happy
A RARE poetess only can reveal what she may intend to conceal lovely poetry tis indeed AQUA 222222 aqua..I always post a comment on every poet who on my does comment as not many have time to return very busy poets all are we composing our own inner heart felt poetry like AQUA JI
A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Sometimes we put limitations to ourselves that will hinder us from enjoying the things our heart desires. We must enjoy the wonders of existence. We can enjoy them if we have freedom. A well crafted write that many of us can relate to.10+++
Thank you dear poetess for your lovely comment about this poem and for commenting on the Note as well.
The title of the poem Aqua Flower written by Aqua Flower attracts me to go through the poem. It is really a beautiful poem regarding freedom. I cite....she wants so much to be free to have the life she dreams of and finally be happy Thank you dear madam for sharing this lovely poem.10
Sometimes writing can reveal too much of the writer's heart; maybe it is the first step in realizing those dreams. A scary first step - but keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deep current of her sweet love! ! Longing for Sunshine love! To touch her lonely heart deeply. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.