feel insecure
in every blink
of eyes
of sunrises
though has
guards, troops
though has
forts that around
arrow of death
never misses
it throbs heart
it cuts soul down
it can’t be safety
with no right path
will vessel sail
on dry ocean?
(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Chad Robinson)
Ahmad aakum very nice deep and reflective words well spoken cheers...its a tenner
will vessel sail on dry ocean? very deep, i like this experssion and pray that we all fllow the right path
arrow of death never misses it throbs heart it cuts soul down shows ur philosophical insights...
Yes; arrow of death pierces the people as destined! Let us hurry to do good things to the society before the arrow kisses us!
good one no matter what you write about, always is good to read your work
you are right! wonderful touching words..........(wont you dedicate a poem to me? ?) hehe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
no matter how well surrounded you may be, death has the finality.