A Fallen Feather

Rating: 3.1

(dedicated to Ms. Dawn Upshaw, a great soprano)

why you so pale?
O fallen feather!
where is your friend?
O fallen feather!

it is me who wait
O fallen feather!
always beside you
O fallen feather!

why you so sad?
O fallen feather!
where is your green?
O fallen feather!

there is a pond
O fallen feather!
who can receive
O fallen feather!

fly down beautifully
O fallen feather!
through snow
O fallen feather!

bring love's message
O fallen feather!
to all man's heart
O fallen feather!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

Fine sentiments in tribute.....................................

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Chad Robinson 21 March 2009

Nice, keep it up. You've got skill, write a book.....

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James Nall 21 March 2009

using a feather: light and airy, yet delicate as only love could be

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Christina Phan 15 March 2009

wow i luv it it rhymics i luv way u did repititon on this poem keep it up

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Aldo Kraas 15 March 2009

That poem is very interesting

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Simpa Omoluabi 20 May 2015

feather falls and falls without a weight of worry

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Patrick A. Martin 18 July 2009

Those who sing bless us twice.1st they bless us with a poets words 2nd they bless us with a voice's music-it's a 10 from me

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 14 May 2009

Softly as a feather caught on a gentle breeze, voice rises and falls, an Aria's emotions of love - Well written Cindy

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

'bring love's message O fallen feather! to all man's heart O fallen feather! ' Love and melodiou poem, love it.

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Indira Renganathan 30 April 2009

Super soprano....zooming in high octaves blessed

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