Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

* Art Of Love~ - Poem by Eyan Desir


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Within a diamond frame
Sits an empty space
A passionate touch
Bridges two vessels
to a single spot
In sunlight, midnight blue
They romantically swayed
Gentle strokes on the blank space
To create a great image.

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Their magnificent colors
Blends perfectly on paper,
The affections shared,
Glows a beauteous light,
That strikes pleasure to the eyes.


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In the home of the encase glass
Sit a priceless treasure
With beauty beyond measure
This master piece was dead!
Love was the painter...
That painted it together.

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Copyright © ® Eyan desir. All rights reserved
Dec 4th 2009

...... Eyan Desir


Comments about * Art Of Love~ by Eyan Desir

  • (7/5/2012 5:30:00 PM)


    wonderfully eye and mind catching...your words are just soothing and sumptuous...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/24/2010 10:41:00 PM)


    a very artistic poem indeed... not just because of the poem itself but also with the mixed design with the help of HTML... colorful and artistic poem! nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 6:02:00 AM)


    very nice reflective poem about love belonging to lyrism
    10/10/10
    Mari
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  • Aastha Uppal (5/5/2010 2:36:00 PM)


    a great blend of art and love... a great eye there to spot the intricacy in an art work.. love the way a chord is struck between the two most delicate and intense things in the world.. nice work! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2010 2:14:00 PM)


    It is true, love is a creation by lovers and between them, the colors, shapes and forms are blended together. Good one. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2010 5:53:00 AM)


    As for me I am a poor writer and good reader as they say.. so what I would like to comment is you tried to make it symbolic... with paintings... but! words are weak.. symbolism in poem must be expressed by words like the word hot... fire this is general denotation.. these days words are used in wrong places but it must be so direct that it denotes the thing you need to say.. did you get me.. any way it's good.. (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2010 2:56:00 PM)


    Your words had captured the picture perfectly and beautifully too. Good one. (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2010 9:37:00 PM)


    the appearance has an art, since it is distributed by colorful lines...contents are nicely done..sweet... (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2010 9:37:00 PM)


    the appearance has an art, since it is distributed by colorful lines...contents are nicely done..sweet... (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2010 9:37:00 PM)


    the appearance has an art, since it is distributed by colorful lines...contents are nicely done..sweet... (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2010 9:36:00 PM)


    the appearance has an art, since it is distributed by colorful lines...contents are nicely done..sweet... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, January 2, 2012