Asset Within My Soul Poem by Bonnie Collins
Asset Within My Soul
Cascades of happy moments
sailed through my heart as I
recalled evey moment that
we laughed, cried, and held
on to each other, those moments
will stay in my vault of untouchables
for a lifetime
We have so much to be thankfull for
actually, as we had each other during
such a wonderfull time in each of our
lives, I think going through the bad, inwhich
tourmented each of us to the point of
non returnable NO Refund, all sales,
like our love FINAL
Bitter/sweet memories I think are made
of elements of this nature, so strong and
powerfull that nothing can erase its stain
Loving you is trully the biggest asset within
my soul.........
A very beautiful and deeply touching piece Bonnie. Great write, love Andrew x
An expression of genuine passion & poignancy, rings loud & clarion, in this fine work Poetess Bonnie.So many pennings on the theme of love, and or romance(my own work, NOT excluded) are laced with a wee too much of what i call pre-fab spice...This work of yours, however....smacks of natural sweet...and its srisp, tight structure bleeds of sound poetic principle. Very Nicely Done, young lady! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
The concept and delivery of this verse reads so very well Bonnie - you have captured the essence of romantic poetry here. - - and I love your use of imagery......10 for sure - - from Fay..
true love makes life cherishable with in...good write...explains the importance of love and understanding in married life...10
that was a realy moving poem- thanks for sharing-10
Happy Thanksgiving..this made me fill like half Indian and half Pilgrim.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 2:55:16 AM # 1.0.0
Bonnie, The caliber of your poetry is definitely shown in this quilled piece... it is of the highest quality prose. Take care, Robert