At 73 Poem by Darwin Henry Beuning

At 73

Rating: 5.0


Started the day
With my silent friends
On the Wall.

Not quiet,
Sounds of lawn mowers
And weed eaters
Filled the air.

Soon, joined by friends,
Kim Barney, poet extraordinaire,
And Ted Lawson, Air Force veteran.

An hour passed, memories shared,
On this day of days -

My birthday

At 73
Thursday, July 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,memories,tears
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written 0545am,30 July 2020.See related poem - Layton, Utah Vietnam Memorial.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 31 July 2020

Congratulations on making it to 73! I hope you had a good birthday!

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Kim Barney 30 July 2020

Hank, that was my first time at the Wall. I have visited the one in Washington, D.C. before, but never this one that is so close to us! A sobering place. So many more names there than people would expect, I think! Readers: The " silent friends" Hank mentioned were the names of the Vietnam War casualties that are printed on the wall. Ted and I were not silent.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 August 2020

Happy birthday, sir Darwin. A fascinating poem.....10+++

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Stephanie T Castillo 02 August 2020

What a great invitation to your Happy Birthday!

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2020

well, hopefully you can spend at least one more birthday with such friends, silent and otherwise; you can write another poem then and just change the title to " At 74" . when you mention the Wall, I think of Vietnam Memorial Wall, your living room wall, and Humpty Dumpty's wall. which was it? were you really sitting on H. D.'s wall? (cont.)

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Chinedu Dike 25 September 2020

A well texted and nicely thought out poem. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2020

(cont.) Kim's comment clarified for me which " wall" you refer to. i visited a 'traveling wall' many years ago. the Vietnam memorial wall (original in Washington D.C.) is where my younger bro (VN non-combatant vet) volunteered for several years on Memorial? Day, helping people to find names of U.S. military who died in? VN due to the " conflict" . I hope you can celebrate at least one more birthday (74) with friends. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2020

Hank, Since my comment of 2-3 days ago hasn't shown up..... Memories can be nice and not-so-nice. i hope and bet that at least some were nice. (cont.)

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bri edwards 13 August 2020

Hey! ! ! there should be a multi- part comment from earlier from me, below. come on PH! !

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2020

(cont.) Memories can be pleasant or not-so-much. I suppose yours(?) were some of both. Be well. Then kick the bucket painlessly. bri :) p.s. Now I read Kim's comment. So my question about wall is answered. I visited a 'traveling VMW' years ago.

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