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Sunday, December 18, 2011

At A Locksmith's

Rating: 4.1
Excuse me Sir!
excuse me please,
I've heard about your too much fame
you claim to make amazing keys
in perfect ease.
Now prove your worth
and pray tell me,
if there 's any master key
by which one can unlock the door-
of iron hearts...
Shazia Batool
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COMMENTS
Ramesh Rai 31 July 2013
The door of heart can be opened only by the keys of love, sympathy, compassion... Great Write. May have a delightful life. regards
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Chandana Khan 25 July 2013
one of my best for its compactness.10 marks
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Passionate Reader 30 June 2013
it's simply great! ! ! The idea is new and different. It's short but rich in meaning. Loved the theme. You have shared a great philosophy of life in simple words! ! ! IMPRESSIVE! ! !
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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013
excellent question Shahzia, The answer- -no I do not think so,
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R.j. Wynn 23 May 2013
Very thought provoking and intriguing.
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Yasmin Khan 16 April 2013
short, straightforward and at the same time offers wealth of meaning...I've read an adage somewhere: 'kind words unlock the iron door'...but some doors are really rusty. A lovely poem!
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Yaseen Anwer 11 March 2013
MashaAllah....Very good!
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Sun Shine 25 January 2013
kia baat hey, nehayat khubsoorat!
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Sun Shine 25 January 2013
OMG! from where you've got the idea! :) lovely!
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Captain Cur 01 June 2012
Very rich concise poem about our human condition. Just the right amount of words and imagery to get the point across.
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