Million Daffodils Poem by Shahzia Batool

Well thought through and wise words. A good write.

A beautiful descriptive poem! ! ! Your poems are a beautiful amalgamation of rhythm and rhyme and this one is another intensely expressive poem. I’m hidden to probing eyes My nature unpredictable My favourite subject Moods I listen to silent melodies Lovely lines especially “I listen to silent melodies”. As you said, I do not know the heavy words But choose the simple ones Yes, though the words you use are simple but every line has a deeper meaning. The poem is not as simple as it looks, it has deeper meanings and every line can be interpreted at so many levels. The way you put one idea after the other, from the start till the end, is brilliant. GREAT FLOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The last lines grabbed my attention and are praiseworthy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Being complex as Algebra sums Best minds will solve me right So take care in your ways of life And do not take me light! ! ! These lines are the whole crux of the poem! ! ! ! ! ! Impressive work! ! ! ! Loved it! ! !

So many comments :) And do not take me light! ! ! If they read you and learn you no one will.

Excellent poem Shahzia, well thought out and very well written. Well done.

Seems me burst of thought in calm and placid mood lovely and... do not take me light! ! ! bold thank

Your muse is really kind to you that let you pen down so nice a verse we enjoy and admire. Am I a best mind to solve you right, dear friend? :)

A cascading flow in writing and sounds in rythem of words.

Best minds will solve me right true! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You are beautiful, unpredictable, formidable, exciting and a wonderful POET.

Every day I keep on learning, life is my teacher so true. nice write.