ants
work night and day
gather foods for rainy days
busy bodies they are
collecting provisions for family
bees are different too
they travel in far places
sucking nectars from plants' stock
and return successfully packed.
arachnids are unique
“She kills he” and eat
oh pity arachnids
they die after they mate
most peculiar are “we”
can share our thoughts suitably
can love... can have freedom
can be the best if we want...
But we’re ‘predator and prey’ in conduct but we’ve highest gray cells! Wow! ! Moluccas [cuttle fish] does so. Ten Ms. Nivedita
Fine comparisons made here and by introducing the work found in nature and the success rates, you go on to show what as humans we too can achieve - - excellent reasoning...... and thank you for the reminders....10 + + + Fay
beautiful metaphor...a great comparison of attitude in natures life...well written.....10
A fabulous array of beings and life's roles and duties..............well penned! 10+++++++
Sound different but written well. That's true and beautiful Enjoyed reading it 10+
Excellent poem. Particularly the last stanza: 'most peculiar are “we' can share our thoughts suitably can love... can have freedom can be the best if we want' Ironic how given a choice, some choose hate over love and enslaving others over freedom.10+++
Your clever insight into the insect world how hard they work...busy bodies... Tenacity is the glue we need to keep on the right track..like your thoughts on the subject ++++10 regards
eautiful comparison of life styles and struggles of tiny creatures like ants and bees with humans. We are the best!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
WHAT YOU SAY IS TRUE! THE DAY FORCES OF 'HATRED' OVERTAKES THE FORCES OF 'LOVE', - THAT WOULD BE THE END OF US -Raj