Attitude Poem by lady grace

Attitude

Rating: 4.8


ants
work night and day
gather foods for rainy days
busy bodies they are
collecting provisions for family

bees are different too
they travel in far places
sucking nectars from plants' stock
and return successfully packed.

arachnids are unique
“She kills he” and eat
oh pity arachnids
they die after they mate

most peculiar are “we”
can share our thoughts suitably
can love... can have freedom
can be the best if we want...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 17 September 2009

WHAT YOU SAY IS TRUE! THE DAY FORCES OF 'HATRED' OVERTAKES THE FORCES OF 'LOVE', - THAT WOULD BE THE END OF US -Raj

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

But we’re ‘predator and prey’ in conduct but we’ve highest gray cells! Wow! ! Moluccas [cuttle fish] does so. Ten Ms. Nivedita

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Fay Slimm 17 September 2009

Fine comparisons made here and by introducing the work found in nature and the success rates, you go on to show what as humans we too can achieve - - excellent reasoning...... and thank you for the reminders....10 + + + Fay

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Ency Bearis 17 September 2009

beautiful metaphor...a great comparison of attitude in natures life...well written.....10

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Catrina Heart 17 September 2009

A fabulous array of beings and life's roles and duties..............well penned! 10+++++++

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 September 2009

Sound different but written well. That's true and beautiful Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Akram Awadat 29 September 2009

interesting and good writing 10

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Patrick McFarland 27 September 2009

Excellent poem. Particularly the last stanza: 'most peculiar are “we' can share our thoughts suitably can love... can have freedom can be the best if we want' Ironic how given a choice, some choose hate over love and enslaving others over freedom.10+++

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Ken E Hall 20 September 2009

Your clever insight into the insect world how hard they work...busy bodies... Tenacity is the glue we need to keep on the right track..like your thoughts on the subject ++++10 regards

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Rehana Nazli 18 September 2009

eautiful comparison of life styles and struggles of tiny creatures like ants and bees with humans. We are the best!

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