Attitude and Omnicide. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Attitude and Omnicide.

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The Supreme shaped the
mainland, ocean, atmosphere.
Furnished them with essentials
for the living everywhere.

Man divided the landmass
to continents, countries and states.
Also the sky and ocean,
forcible imposed the limits.

Not satisfied,
split the mankind further
on basis of caste, colour,
language, power and religion.
The seeds of difference have
been sown and perpetuated
only by actions of man.

Science and technology
contribute substantially
for the wellbeing of man.
Attitude and activities of man
have invited miseries
for self -destruction.

Climate change, global warming,
intoxicated biosphere,
weapons of mass killing,
nuclear holocaust,
increasing hatred
are detrimental for life.
Incursions, expansionism,
militarism, terrorism,
extremism are on the rise.

Danger of apocalypse
for the whole creation
is hovering over our heads.
Only a genuine attitudinal change
may help delaying
our speed to reach
the frightening ends.

It is high time
to rethink about
the elimination
of devastating tools.
In the language of
Honourable Martin Luther king Jr.
'We must learn to live
together as brothers or
perish together as fools'.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Attitude, miseries, brothers, fools.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 29 August 2021

Thank yiou so much for this lovely lecture, Sir. I have enjoyed the many many words and synonyms uttered here. Thank you for sharing, Sir

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 September 2021

A great and meaningful message to humanity. So wonderful thoughts to ponder about.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 September 2021

Insightful lines so very true. Brilliantly crafted.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2021

' The seeds of difference have been sown and perpetuated only by actions of man.' A very discerning line from a great poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 February 2022

Having visited again your fascinating poems, I still enjoyed tremendously your poetic expressions, once you submitted here a story poem or a long verse, you will be called POET, Dr. Dash, your poems result says it all, I am still enjoying your other poems, thank you for creating and sharing

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 November 2021

We are perishing together as fools

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2021

Revisiting this wonderful poem. A vivid depiction of man's weaknesses that build division and fuel hatred.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 October 2021

I have come to reread this scintillating poem, Dr. Dash. I have enjoyed tremendously your fisrt stanza, I cite here: The Supreme shaped the mainland, ocean, atmosphere. Furnished them with essentials for the living everywhere. Fantastic!

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Nabakishore Dash 02 November 2021

Respected Ma'am, Many thanks for your appreciation.I am reminded of your first comment wherein you addressed me jai hind on poem power of words.I am not at all a poet. Comments of a group of great writers in PH inspired to write more from my own experience.with my heart felt gratitude.t

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Indira Renganathan 28 October 2021

Human life well analyzed throughout to give a nice ending...liked a lot...5*****

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