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Awaiting Love.

Rating: 5.0

Darkly wrapping ourselves in lonliness,
Withdrawing inside a wearisome heart
In no way prepares our life in readiness
To encounter the time when true love can start.
Awaiting the flowering of breathtaking
Emotion like love needs a heart gently warmed
With expectancy, softened by making
A habit of kindness, thus will be formed
No unrealistic, self-serving dreams,
But gentle sufficiency, growing until

Another, one day, awakens the gleams
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Ashley Ormon 05 October 2008

You most certainly portrayed the feelings of love very well. This poem has a flowy sense to it, I like it.

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David Desantis 03 October 2008

Excellent Fay- this delivers on all levels. The flow is great, the message of opening up and embracing love, the style...you are a truly great writer 10/10

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

love is a ffeling beyond words but u proved that words are stronger enough to bring out the essense of love 10

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Sid John Gardner. 29 September 2008

Marvellous writing Fay.The worst thing about love is when having captured it, in all its forms, then dispensed with it knowingly is a numbing of the soul.Waiting to re-capture its essence is a painful process and seems impossible when you have been deeply wounded in love. Sid xx.

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Sandra Fowler 28 September 2008

Gentle, introspective, filled with kindness and warmth. True poetry is ageless. Write on by all means. As always, Sandra

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Adam Day 25 September 2008

fay, your poems move me every time i read them and this one locked me down you are truly gifted.10++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 September 2008

Some times we need to reach out for that understanding hand.. Andrew 10

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Kathleen West 25 September 2008

Beautiful poem written with an open heart. We must be open to love and take the risk, the first courageous step.

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Koyel Mitra 25 September 2008

You have gripped well the sublime power of love in this beautiful poem.A 10!

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Kesav Easwaran 24 September 2008

prepare, heart wet kind and soft ready to grow flowering cherishable love...good message, Fay...a good poem written in free flowing poetic lines...10

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