Back In Time Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Well done Dave.Yes all the time we must have who gos through us, it's the judgement part of our self, that part which tell us about the right and wrong.

An amazing poem....the flow of it was fantastic, genuinely beautiful!

I love this poem...! ! !

I was wondering, what will I feel if I really traveled back in time... It will be a time when I will face myself and judge.. Well written! !

really nice poem.................a horror poem

A very nice poem, nicely written, and love the topic.

great little write - the angle on your shoulder

To me good inciteful poetry is not always written in long verse or many stanzas. You my friend pour so much into your style and it leaves the reader with thoughts to think as many of your fellow poets commented. Nicely done! ! ! J. L.

This reminds me of how I have had things happen to me that made no sense in regard to the laws of time, space, physics..but I can't deny them because they did happen to me, and to disregard them would mean I would have to totally not believe anything I saw or heard or detected with my physical senses. This makes me much more open to other people's odd experiences; I tend to believe now rather than question. Nice job here.

I really appreciate your writing style, Dave. It is concise and thought provoking. It really left me with a lasting feeling at the end of the page. Thank you for sharing.