Backlash Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Backlash
Neither had I feared a backlash
Nor attempted to make eye wash
Wished smooth passage and no down fall
Prayed almighty not to face any distress call
Childhood passed off easily under the protection
Parents looked after well without my action
I was lucky to have their protective shield
Seeds were growing and offering high yield
Horizon seemed to me vast and open
Blue sky and earth were no less than heaven
I could think of major leap forward
Acts of brave person and not that of coward
I had to be reasonably alert and cautious
World and people around seemed to be vicious
Making headway was concern and cause of worry
Still it did not bother as I was not in hurry
I had to learn a lot from rising sun
Reaching on the top without making run
Not to fall back from destiny under slight pretext
It was high time to undergo vigorous test
Let it not prove as difficult task
Honest dealing without putting on mask
I may suffer heavily on this count
Difficulties may surface and pressure mount
I shall withstand the waves and shocks
Sea waters may rush and knock at the rocks
Will do everything to wither the storm
Brave front always to remain in form
Luck or no luck but can weaken the spirit
Best efforts should be made on merit
We may face down fall or momentary setback
It may teach lessons from the drawbacks
Dear respected poet, Your poetry is exemplary I totally agree. All the best, with regards, M V VENKATARAMAN
Neither had I feared a backlash Nor attempted to make eye wash Wished smooth passage and no down fall
Neither had I feared a backlash Nor attempted to make eye wash.very good poem indeed....10
I had to learn a lot from rising sun Reaching on the top without making run. That is what you've done, poetically. I'm particularly impressed by your rhymes and images thanks for sharing
Wished smooth passage and no down fall Prayed almighty not to face any distress call Childhood passed off easily under the protection Parents looked after well without my action I was lucky to have their protective shield Seeds were growing and offering high yield Horizon seemed to me vast and open Blue sky and earth were no less than heaven I could think of major leap forward life moves with time in progress under umbrella of both parents, guiding and educating...., one is lucky to have all the best in the life, and gets able to stand erect in the society.............wonderful poem
I had to learn a lot from rising sun Reaching on the top without making run Not to fall back from destiny under slight pretext It was high time to undergo vigorous test ................................ beautiful piece..beautiful lines..So inspiring to read
Beautifully landscape of poetry.....this is a poem for refreshing and for stress management.....just a ponder would mean a lot to unlock our emotional pain.....recommended for people who have no reason to pacify them selves....no reason the...Why of this world.....this would help their doubt.....thank you for sharing...and God bless you my friend a 10....and a Star
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 6:08:24 PM # 1.0.0
i loved ur poem it was great i give it a 10