Bare Assed

Rating: 5.0
I come to you now unclothed, unwashed and unabashed,
This is my barest, lowliest, truest self,
With wanton passions brimming, ogling with animal intent
This is me wallowing neck deep in the sweet but unctuous tar pit
Nurturing my prurient delights, my wettest of dreams
I slink through dark parlors besotted and puking
I spew lewd orations enjoyed by kindred low life,
My gem of the barrel dregs! Jewel of the sewer silt!
I come to you unclothed, unwashed and unabashed
Frenzied and clumsy in anticipation
I rush and come to be one with you,
So, embrace me now my lovely, quickly
Before I don my clothes again.
Monday, March 16, 2009
Sally Plumb 25 March 2009
You seem to be full of fun.
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Inday Prising 24 March 2009
'I come to you now unclothed, unwashed and unabashed, This is my barest, lowliest, truest self' i love this lines..
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Seema Chowdhury 23 March 2009
your poems and wordings take the reader with you inside these lines.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 March 2009
A very original poem showing crudity of life....... A definite 10.
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Jim Norausky 19 March 2009
Raw and right out there. Well penned. Jim
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Carl Harris 17 March 2009
One thing I enjoy about reading your poems, Eddie, is that there is no beating around the bush, you get right down to the point in all of your fine poems! This intriguing write is no exception. It is very descriptive of the underside of life, far from the spotless penthouses of the wealthy who essentially engage in the same practices as we more average folks do though they pay more for such services. I loved the phrasing in most of your lines, especially your final five lines in this terrific poem. Carl.
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Sonya Florentino 17 March 2009
this made me laugh, cuz I was thinking, is this the answer to my poem 'Naked into Night.' (another great one from you)
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T S 17 March 2009
A very exposed Lovely write 10 ++++
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Mark R Slaughter 17 March 2009
Open, barefaced realism. Another great work Eddie. Mark
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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 March 2009
With every poem I read of yours I become more and more of your fan. Beautifully flowing poem. I can say a true poem.....
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