Battlefield Poem by Min Sia

Battlefield

Rating: 5.0


From a land of sand arise two kinds of warrior
A vagabonds leading into the same phenomenon
Pass through up hill and down dale
Crushing every stones hanging from fountains

Two warriors in sweat wetted the realms of their existence
Manifest the longing from the untamed freedom
Arousing one's emotion jailed from boredom
Insatiable for the needs between each unveiled tongues

Bodies conquering bodies
Wrestled, rolled down into the flames
Body growled request for desire
But chilled from identified unknown identity

Slowly bodies started to explode
Stealth, stolen the worth thing and leave
Let her melted heart flowing through waves
Breaking the bondage of silhouette lies

Upon the highest fortress where sacredness remains
Reunited Glory and Grace in to a Shield
She killed the man pierced through his heart
Until, the hollow swallowed the tenderness of night




Min 'Grace' Sia feat. Naru 'Rirunaru' Kaede
..it was made despite the distance...

PS: for all the men in the world...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 16 December 2008

wonderful narrative poem....well written, nice flow - meter..good collaboration Min and Naru...thumbs up 10***** Ency Bearis

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 16 December 2008

Hello poet, an awesome read. Loyd

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

You killed the man that loves you? ? ? well, we can call this the battlefield of sadness.Remember Min, every man is a warrior when they say they love you.He's your warrior.

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C T Heart 16 December 2008

The wild and passionate act, sensual poetry intertwined.

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Sarah Sisson 16 December 2008

pretty wild... I love it!

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

A WONDERFUL POEM...............

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Reshma Ramesh 18 December 2008

well done and well done......................! !

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Ridge Cahill 18 December 2008

Excellently done, you both should be proud of this accomplishment.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

a poetic story of 'Grace' and 'Glory'...narrated very emotionally, Min...i feel the poem isn't complete...you have more to spill out in your heart on this...10

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Fiona Davidson 17 December 2008

lovely well written story...very descriptive...thank you

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