Be Independent Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Be Independent

Rating: 4.7


Dear, come,
Come to the poems,
Come and live with poems,
Live, and live in the kingdom of poems,
Because I know you need independence,
You want to live long and you want independence,
You want independence -
in love, lover and beloved,
in writing, reading, and speaking,
in feelings and thinking,
in eating and drinking,
in awakening, sleeping, and dreaming,
in politics, sociology, municipality, and economics,
in religion, belief, and disbelief,
in true and false,
in hue and caste,
in race and nation,
in mental satisfaction,
in everything you want independence,
in everything you need independence.
So, dear, you need to come to the kingdom of poems.
You have to come to poems to get your full independence.

Because -
the poems teach how to know yourself,
the poems teach how to discover yourself,
the poems teach how to rule over yourself,
the poems teach how to come and be part of the immortal soul,
the poems teach how to sympathize for other sorrow,
the poems teach how to be thoughtful of self and conscientious.

And -
the one who recognizes himself is independent,
the one who discovers himself is independent,
the one who rules over himself is independent,
the one who comes and becomes the part of the immortal soul is independent,
the one who makes himself thoughtful and conscientious is independent.

In all lessons of life, poems make -
magnanimous heart, broad mind,
kind sight, a helpful hand,
concerned and humane feet.

Dear, please come,
Come to the poems to be the humane scent,
Come to the poems to be independent.



- September 10,2018 Chattogram

Be Independent
Tuesday, September 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: independence,poems,self discovery,writings
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 23 June 2019

Every known truth about independence is in your poem. Beautifully cast into our minds.

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Muzahidul Reza 26 June 2019

Dear, come, Come to the poems, Come and live with poems, Live, and live in the kingdom of poems, // well expression,

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Denis Mair 20 June 2019

This poem places high expectations on both reader and writer of poetry. It is a definition that energizes poets. I think a case can be made that this definition is the true one. There is joy in contemplating the road ahead.)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2019

Congratulations, MAHTAB for having this poem chosen as Poem Of The Day. A truly deserved accolade.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2019

Poem Hunter recognizes the importance of Poetry and has given emphasis to this great art, hence, the creation of this site. Poem Hunter gave us a corner of our own, an independent corner free from financial burden, where we can weave our our own colorful and beautiful world without the interference of anyone as long as it is in accordance with the standards set by Poem Hunter and within the constitutional boundaries of freedom of expression.

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David Wood 07 February 2022

Independence comes out in your excellent poem. Nicely written, a good 5*

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Sultan Deen 14 February 2021

let the independence in the poetic verse comes like the prophecy of a Prophet of Bani Israeil.

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Sultan Deen 14 February 2021

be independent like the morning breeze, air, weather of the springtime, like the raindrops of the monsoon........be independent like the ever greatest poetic verse

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Mac Che 28 January 2021

let your independence be the universal scent of humanity

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Mac Che 28 January 2021

Everything and everyone born free but chained everywhere cause of good manner- sometimes ultra or nonsense independence calls the ultimate havoc of everything

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