Be Natural, Do Natural Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Be Natural, Do Natural

Rating: 4.3


Nature has its own laws.
Do not violate a single clause.
Just be natural, do natural,
If you want a youth eternal.

Deep within her,
Nature has set a receptacle
To collect the jets
Of the produce of your testicle.

A safe pouch, to mold and develop,
It's nature's job to protect and envelop
The embryo, your posterity, your scion,
Unless you resort to a sinful abortion.

So, be in love, and do make love!
But do not do it too wantonly,
Follow the natural route.
Not the one meant for 'EXIT ONLY'.


Dhaka
22 September 2013

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 29 September 2013

this is what can be called a prescriptive composition based on observation and the teaching of a lesson following...in the teaching terminology poetry is a tutorial workshop where lessons based on life are delivered in a pleasant manner...thank you for this!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 September 2013

We are taking the to exit nature's laws of balancing is most important and we are not following thank u

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Abhishek Mishra 25 September 2013

A short but wonderful poem...you are one of the gems we have on PH: -)

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Noreen Carden 25 September 2013

Great poem with a very clear message well done

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Cassandra Jasmine 24 September 2013

Philosophical. It may be short, but there's a clear message that anyone may intercept. Great poem, Mr. Ahsan!

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Khairul Ahsan 28 June 2014

@Sophy Iminzah Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your appreciative words here. I am truly inspired.

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Centfie Val Chunge 28 June 2014

Wow! This is deep! I like the way you portray a number of themes in a few lines. I see, nature, life, love, abortion e.t.c

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Khairul Ahsan 28 May 2014

@Akhtar Jawad Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2014

a bold and beautiful poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2014

@Beauteous Victory Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it.

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