! Be Still Poem by Bob Blackwell

! Be Still

Rating: 3.7


An empty mind
holds no tears,
no sadness
for the past.

Soften,
the cold hard
places of
your heart.

Listen for that
knowledge,
the love,
that lies within.

And stay close,
to the sounds,
that will make
you feel alive.

10-05-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 23 May 2009

The real stillness of the mind is much sought after but so difficult to find...

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Surayya Abbas 20 May 2009

Wisely written very touching piece.

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 May 2009

Very touching and moving few words Bob..well expressed indeed..thanks 10++

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Mamta Agarwal 17 May 2009

be still in a state of zen, very inspiring write. glad i opened it, its midnight and your wise words make me feel calm, ready to call it a day.thanks Bob.10 I was just going to read Tich nhat hanh, but now I don't have to. Mamta

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Mimi Fakhira 16 May 2009

Deep and meaningful, a poem that reflects your mystical mind. Good job! 10

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Charles Wanjohi 06 December 2009

'Be still' the way to listen to the inner self. Great write.

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Meggie Gultiano 28 November 2009

Listen for that knowledge, the love, that lies within. ................... I am at peace reading this.A wonderful write.

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T McH 30 May 2009

I only wish I could listen more closely, and hear. The stillness of this piece is what gets through. t xx

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Sandra Fowler 24 May 2009

It is in stillness that creativity has its genesis. Your last stanza is especially profound. I am so glad I did not miss this one. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Malcolm The Last. 24 May 2009

Wonderful poem......i think this mind is not empty though, but perfectly vacant.....

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