Be The Moon Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Be The Moon

Rating: 4.8


Face the night with a glow
Smile down on a poor soul
Light up a sad, secluded pathway
Spread your light, but not hide your scars
Be the moon, sometimes.

Be The Moon
Monday, August 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 22 August 2017

A cute little poem and a lovely image! Yes, let us be the moon, shedding a little light in darkness!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 August 2017

To be a moon sometimes is a nice idea but to be a life giving sun always is a greater idea.

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Rini Shibu 21 August 2017

Spread your light but not hide your face.. Lovely poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

This night with beautiful imagery shines with hope and love. Spreading light we feel beautiful moon here is interesting. An amazing sharing is done definitely. Thoughtfully penned poem is shared.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 August 2017

Very nice. A strong message for all to share love and to leave a mark that will be followed by brave and kind. Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 01 September 2017

So soft... so gently illuminating.... your pen was filled with moonbeams perhaps? Reads that way anyway- -reads like a poem trailing moonlight to guide us through the shadowy paths

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Muhammad Ali 25 August 2017

don't hide scars and spread your light, beautiful way to see and say it in a poem. a positive message

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Daniel Brick 24 August 2017

This is a very characteristic NOSHEEN POEM. It sets a lovely scene with the beauty of nature movingly evoked to carry your message. And that message always includes a sense of sympathy for someone who doesn; t have access to the Joy you highlight. The Moon itself is a fickle friend, if y0u were the moon it would shed consoling light consistently. And we would rejoice at your fidelity!

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Tom Billsborough 24 August 2017

Like the brave full moon in your photo, a sparkling poem to match. This is a very good and wise poem.

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Edmund Strolis 23 August 2017

Well reading Kumarmani's comments I could only think that I was glad that he had read them. Interesting and revealing how the calm, soothing handful of words work their magic. Reading each syllable so light yet with the weight of wisdom, so natural like a handful of moon dust.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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