Beach Poem by ONElia AVElar
Beach
Fine, warm sand under the skin;
breeze playing with the long hair;
seagull`s yells and distant babel;
she feels invisible - stretched
on the overcrowded beach;
innocent, bare-back Eve
from the holy Bible.
onelia, It is very beautiful and thin poems...10.... Best wishes, Tsira
Hail to thee blithe spirit! You sing the songs of bare being; The sun, the sea and the breeze, Like seagull, release the body's ring. CP
Fine, warm sand under the skin; breeze playing with the long hair; seagull`s yells and distant babel; she feels invisible - stretched on the overcrowded beach; innocent, bare-back Eve from the holy Bible. a great theme inter related to spritual saisfaction and symbolic way way of writing..like this type of poetry..your doing well and most of your poems are well written., .appreciate you
Surely a self-portrait, Onelia - you've captured the primitive feeling of joy, freedom and abandon to sensuality and the warm sun that one feels on a beach holiday... and I expect Adam was glad you were there too!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 12:21:13 AM # 1.0.0
Ahhh lovely write...short and sweet................10++ sebastine