Beast In Beas Poem by Vijay Sai R

Beast In Beas

Rating: 4.5


Snow clad peaks
Grazing clouds
Glazing meadows
Weeping weather
Poking sunlight
Busy birds
So much to adore
Words struggling to express
Nature at its best
Where many students
On a study tour
In Himachal Pradesh
Enjoying lush greenery
Moving over river bed
On a slender stream
Of beautiful Beas
When all of a sudden
Many of them
Were swept away
Quite mercilessly
Gushing water
Running everywhere
Reservoir gates
Thrown open
Without any caution
Human error
Destroying altogether
Though authorities suspended
And immediate action taken
Loss of lives
Whom to answer?

Friday, June 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The "Beas River" is a river in North India. The river rises in the Himalayas in Central Himachal Pradesh, India, and flows for some 290 miles to the Sutlej River in the Indian State of Punjab.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2014

Fantastic flow of words. You have portrayed this poem very well. I could picturise it. Beautiful Description of nature adds beauty to this poem. Loved reading it.

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Colin Andersen 20 June 2014

excellent portrayal of nature and how it is maligned, with a social message weaved in

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Moto Wa 17 June 2014

Really great man. So nice, I like it.

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 17 June 2014

This is Phenomenal! the rhythm is uninterrupted all through the poem.

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Kemurl Fofanah 14 June 2014

this is great work...i deserves 10...

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John Raubenheimer 29 July 2014

Thank you Vijay. Playful phrases carry your reader to a place where all his assumptions have to be reassessed. A tragic event, thoughtfully and movingly described..

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Lalit Kaira 28 July 2014

whom to answer....... good indeed

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 June 2014

A tragedy of immense proportions. Great future swept away in an instant. Poem is full of concern and caution.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 June 2014

A glamorous nature poem that ends tragically. Sad to read. Nature is destructive too.

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Chris Zachariou 22 June 2014

This poem which starts describing an idyllic scene that turns into a catastrophe halfway shocks in an unexpected the mind. It is very powerful. Chris

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Vijay Sai R

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Trichy, South India
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