Walking down the streams;
My mind was filled with your dreams.
Your sweet smile will make me come up,
Your strong hands will make me give up,
and with your thoughts i will end up.
I still remember the day i met you
and my heart said.
I can never find another you
its a very nice short love poem, well written.. keep writing.
good rhyming, impressive lines. keep writing... be blessed!
Amazingly romantic! well done Elsee!
Very beautiful! 'I can never find another you' - What a beautiful, nice and sweet phrase!
Sweet write. Speaks of the innocence of a first love maybe? Nicely expressed words of devotion. Anna
Very beautiful and delicately expressed. Nice, heartfelt words and warmth. Well done. DC
A NICE LYRICAL POEM! BUT HAVE YOU READ IT OUT TO YOUR SPECIAL 'YOU'? -Raj
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
OMG! ! really an awesome poem! ! loved it! ! loved the rythm n the flow! ! <3 hpe u hve some time to read my poems too! ! tc