Bed Of Flowers Poem by louis rams

Bed Of Flowers



i found myself in a bed of flowers
looking up towards the sky
i laid there inhaling the sweet
fragrances of the flowers
and thinking of you and i.

the fragrances tickled my nostrils
and the memories flooded back in
thinking of all the joys we had
and all the things we did.

every feature of your face
the color of your eyes
the way your hair fell upon your shoulders
and how you could hypnotize.

i felt your arms around me
the tenderness of your embrace
your soft tender kisses
kissing my neck
kissing my face
taking me back to another world,
another time
another place.

you had captured my heart with all that i saw
and in my heart live there
now and forever more.

i smell the fragrance of your body
and it fills me with delight.
i feel your presence near me
although you're not in sight.

all my five senses are reaching out to you
but you're not there
and i don't know what to do.

so i'll lie in this bed of flowers
until you finally arrive
and in my heart i know
that our hearts will both entwine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful, never said this before.. but i wish those words were mine... lol... I love it big bro!

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Vaibhav Pandey 02 March 2009

very beautiful......I liked it a lot

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Sandra Fowler 02 March 2009

In the language of flowers, this one is captivating.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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I absolutely love the beginning.. Nice work Louis Krista

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a sad song with lovely flowers beside you...a true loss

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 December 2009

‘…all my five senses are reaching out to you // but you're not there // and i don't know what to do….’ One more sense left the 6th …very powerful and that make love a LOVE Thanks for sharing Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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C. P. Sharma 20 August 2009

Captivating opening stanza beautifully summed up in the last. CP

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2009

so i'll lie in this bed of flowers until you finally arrive and in my heart i know that our hearts will both entwine. until finally u make it for me... beautiful poem with deeep thought n romatic too....10 read mine.....home bound... come home... no separate ways and divorce

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 15 March 2009

A poem that painted a beautiul painting................ Good Write........

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 March 2009

Lovely piece of love...title is really good...Nice lines

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