Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Being Myself. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Being created by Love
To love life,
I grow daily
To love being myself.
Not ashamed
Of this fact, I no longer strive
To be some passionless
Grey soul, with helpless
Needs. - I feed on life.
Am 'passion revived'.
Wild joy overtakes me
At times, - elates me.
Pulsating energy
Helps me survive.
Infuses delight.
Transports me freely
To find, at the least excuse
A broad smile.
I know passion should
Never be joyless.
Passively giving in
Is defiling
To the 'me' that is myself now.
Quite buoyant
Am I, yet subtlely quiet
Inside, - cloaked
In commitment to love.
Heartbeat submitting
To nothing but pleasure
In giving, I now
Celebrate me, willingly.
Recycled maybe - - but
I like the new 'me'.

Comments about Being Myself. by Fay Slimm

  • Meggie Gultiano (7/2/2009 3:06:00 AM)

    I like the new 'me'.
    I love this line..very positive
    And i love the flow of your words..So gentle..

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  • Smiley Hooker (6/28/2009 4:30:00 AM)

    You must be as God created you, Fay - special in His eyes - so there's no need to change. well expressed thoughts, I love it! : -) (Report) Reply

  • Chandrashekar A Posy Poet (6/26/2009 4:09:00 AM)

    yeah grey souls are so sore! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    heha! well expressed Fay....Very natural but the message us well shouted! It's nice to be you huh...! it's an art of simplicity indeed! two thumbs up for this loving lady! (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2009 11:59:00 PM)

    butiful.. fay.. many a poet.. need this.. thanks (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2009 9:14:00 AM)

    a very natural write the flow was very natural..the thought of it gives the simplicity to this poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2009 5:09:00 AM)

    I Liked the flow of
    this easy to read
    Good job
    keep liking youself...

    ...Love doctor
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  • (6/21/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    We age, we experience more of life, we take in what we like, if the mix is right we must improve. But if we learn to love what life offers, notice all its charms, learn its lesson of share with all, we become a lovely caring person, just like you. I agree with you life is great. Bobx 10+ (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    hello Fay! ! !

    this is a great one for me indeed! ! ! ..i m sort of a trying to find who i am...i mean arent we all? ......well, some times i feel just being my self is not enough....for instance if we ask a drunkard to be yourself dear! ! he ll always stay as a drunkard...in such case we doo have to change for the better too.... this is a great write, and your poems seems to shine what a beautiful person you are 10+++

    with love
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  • (6/19/2009 4:49:00 AM)

    Sometimes it takes us a little longer to find the real you, but when you do, you love your self more each day.. :) 10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    you have always been you!
    finding yourself! is something new
    no deadlines to meet, live for today
    there's peace and love in your heart! Fay
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  • (6/18/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    'Recycled maybe-but; i like the new me' my favorite part of the poem, Good Poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 8:49:00 AM)

    Fay...You sound very happy with your new 'me'....and you sound
    like a lovely lady, your poem is lovely too...10++
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  • (6/18/2009 8:49:00 AM)

    Revitalizing the inner self, invigorating through the outer personality...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    a nice rejuvenated feeling and expressed well....wonderful verses....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 3, 2009

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