Beloved's Color Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Beloved's Color

Rating: 4.8


Capture the true color of your beloved
Dye your heart in warm tones

Many different wavelengths of light
Ablaze by the eyes she owns

(2009/1/23)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 29 January 2009

less words, yet compact in meaning... lovely piece..10++++

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J. P. Dullahan 29 January 2009

A little gem of a poem - has great feeling and originality. Loved it.

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Alison Cassidy 26 January 2009

'Dye your heart in warm tones' is an original and charming metaphor. The poem is succinct, lyrical and engaging. Delightful piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Painted with the colors of brevity and beauty.

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Lynda Robson 24 January 2009

You seem to pack so much into so few lines, another beautiful poem from you, lovely words, 10 Lynda xx

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Reihaneh Jalalian 04 February 2009

very impressive, short but full of deep meaning 10

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Samantha Williams 03 February 2009

+10 very nice! ! xoxo

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 February 2009

10 added to it. Beautiful short poem.

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Jim Norausky 29 January 2009

Interesting poetic concept. Well done. Jim

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Reihaneh Jalalian 29 January 2009

short but beautiful. well done 10

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