Best Thing I Never Had Poem by Tia Maria

Best Thing I Never Had

Rating: 5.0


You are the best thing that I never had
Thoughts of you almost drive me mad
To never know what could have been
Were you real or were you a dream

And have you ever wondered too
If such a dream we could ever do
Caught up in a lover's fine web
Loving someone else, instead

Giving but never really getting
Just to fill some kind of a void
No emotions, just simply settling
For real love somehow to avoid

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 03 June 2009

Perhaps the proud are to unforgiving..to bow a fiddle true...iip

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Sonya Florentino 08 June 2009

'the best thing I never had'..you really hit the nail on this one...it's sad but laughable at the same time.. because what can one do in the end... laugh or die crying!

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Tia this is complicatedly beautiful lol. I love the line, you are the best thing i never had. Only in your imagination could those lines appear and with your poetry make them come alive and touch the heart. Thank you for sharing my friend. :)

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Fiona Davidson 03 June 2009

Poignant write Tia...there will always be that question....Fi 10+++

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maggie murray 03 June 2009

Yearning for someone you never had makes the heart feel lost and sad heart rending words, and understood completely.. Maggie

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Fay Slimm 03 June 2009

Tia your first line is riveting - -and the flow of the rest adds its own pathos - -a strong yet sad verse - - 10 ++ with hugs from Fay...xx

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