Between challenged and away,
harassed at a throw,
ethics and endless,
Between rules and ruthless
Pain and pathetic
wishes and delivers
Between watch and mis-match
engulfed in False Allegations abound,
Not any way but run and frantic ways you find,
breathing toxins even on Move and worse,
your eyes burn away..
You lose sense of life and life's Course
feel No sense of existence but remain a bundle of Meat
You run places you never been to,
only find ends of streets
...edges of society.
Doves of strangers as hell
rangers on your heels
posing as angels, you turn away
everybody comes as a friend,
only to quickly show up as the worst Foe!
not any challenge.., No! !
looking at the sky, stars shy away
smiling behind shades of clouds
So long you defy, end is only a back
hands pained stretching for you..
stand on a shore look at the void
nothing but Waves of Pain.. evade!
waves rolling on feet… kiss them away gentle
sounds of waves, …spare them for a cry!
come back in a swift..!
down here or when there..
no more lyrics of pain left for you..
showers of toxins don't stop,
rains of Pains never end,
you drench in your own!
tied in years' long Chains of pain! !
ended a fool, listen it not again,
gather a soul n be back,
still u have a seat here!
Come back in a swift..!
no more lyrics of pain left for you..! !
Steal the roar of the Ocean,
…spare that for your cry,
Stealth is so Cold and dry,
Stark truth(s) are bitter and as much shy!
copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)
rains of Pain never stop, you drench in your own! wonderful poem -voted 10
it is my real Life dear Poet in much moire than this Video I posted! ! and worst means! ! am a last of the Holocaust Victim you can time me! ! I Love Germany! !
Dear Diana, it is a Poem of real life suffering and without knowing form and words but egony that was spilled! Wonder too how many good people are in this world like you to reap the and understand the epitome of words! ! I bow to you!
" everybody comes as a friend, only to quickly show up as the worst Foe! " " showers of toxins don't stop, rains of Pains never end, you drench in your own! tied in years' long Chains of pain! " So much emotion and pain shown here, I wish you much happiness and peace.
Great poem. Yesturday, I met this Great Man. He is living on the streets of Hyderabad. He is jobless and homeless. Hoping he finds peace in his life.
Sad in a way, but the emotions are portrayed in a forceful manner. May you find the peace you so much desire.
every single line speaks for itself, i don't really think i'll assume i know what you where feeling when u wrote this. But honestly i can really relate. Those are just the dark times of onces life. Nice one...
A poem that speaks of the dark anguish of the soul, extremely well written. Hoping you find peace in life beyond poetry.
You should not have mentioned it here, as it makes one read the poem already with a mind set on the emotion the following lines might deliver. Well, anyways, your honest expressions within this economy of expression has its go. them images and expressions are corresponding and complementing, thats what comfortably conveys the cadence of emotions. Not necessarily you compose feelings of loss, pain, misfortune or calamities on the word-canvass of dreadful despondency, it can too be on notes of promises and promptness of others' passions. Keep penning sensibly wonderful poems, this will eliminate the inner soul's craving for sympathy and empathy. This is the psycho analysis of this piece of poetry and the poet within my present mind set. Regards.