Womb! Poem by Siddartha Montik


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..the big WOMB!

Yes Women here in life have those Sacred wombs to give the Birth,

the Good Earth is, IS, A big womb too,
for all the Nature, and creation it holds in its might! !
as how the protective layers in a Mother Cares for a child for months,

Earth has very many layers too around it, protecting all thecreation and life!

We do technology and pierce it with Rockets, Air crafts destroying its very sacred layers,
we know about OZONE layer yet we hardly care its Zone Haa! !

We need fast travel and do cross layers with a thorough skim,
The Mother womb hardly ever faced this until recently and Short while of Technology this experience to its brim,
We hardly care to know even while Mother expresses in many ways about its whim!

We do much Industrialization and push it with Gases many,
We spill polluted water from factories on surface, lest it would absorb,
We Hardly knew our ways and means as we Go, but want Air so superb!

We get protected, by every Layer around earth we hardly know,
this our Mother's womb Provides in immaculate and impeccable way.

.. wonder how much is commonbetween Mother Earth and our veryMother!

Nature is Nature!

Oh No when we would learn what we are doing?

Again your ATTENTION. GOD.! !

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Thursday, January 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,nature
Safiyyah Manjra 18 September 2018

I care about the earth as much as you do, what a womb indeed. I never pictured it like that, nice imagery.

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Superb...your comparison of earth as womb is so perfect...we people are the foetus, we are taking all nutrients but distroying her without mercy.

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Julia Luber 20 February 2019

Very strong bold honest important poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 September 2018

Siddartha, such a wonderful poem...............................

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 August 2019

Global warming is a serious problem we face......10+++++

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Anju Addanki 16 April 2020

wonderful poem.three important things in the world mother earth and womb

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Luz Hanaii 25 January 2020

Mother earth and her womb, it's our duty to protect her otherwise we won't be around for long. Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder.

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Siddartha Montik 26 June 2019

may be after al FRACTALS is one part of nature even in function? ? Thanks to all those who like my this Poem WOMB! ! - amen, Siddartha Montik

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Alouwou Mandjah 14 May 2019

nicely penned - Siddartha Montik

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Archita Kumar 13 May 2019

Hats off to you. A mother is a mother.You can't differentiate between mother earth and blood and flesh mother. Like blood and flesh mother has a capacity to give birth mother earth also has the capacity to give birth and carry her children's (us) inside her womb.Very well said " The good earth is big womb too." Very well expressed and written.The poem really touched my Heart. Wish you best of luck for future writing. Please read my poems also.

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