Coldness Poems: 9 / 500

Of Barren Lands And Deserts! !

Rating: 4.6

seems like I am getting drawn to
the beauty of barren lands and the deserts,

as fiercely as I go in my best efforts
drying up every drop of love that never quenches my thirst!
the pain is getting so dry,
I am getting in love with the dryness!

eagerly waiting for a sharp and cold knife
to rip me off..still standing there to fight it off,
that it just melts down and then dries-up..
so I find my dryness to go ahead! !

coldness is enough.. this coldness
is so enough.. I got so frozen-up,
as much as my wishes and pleads for love!

find no warmth in these
cold hearts.., no warmth,
all is good now go find my place
in the scorching heats,

get burned and be happy
spreading the warmth like Sun,
to every coldest of the hearts,
that might freeze another heart, otherwise!

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Of Barren Lands And Deserts! !
Saturday, July 11, 2009
Coldness Poems: 9 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: desert,despair,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Hopkins 01 June 2017

A blessing of Light to you Sir.

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Tom Allport 01 June 2017

a poem full of heartfelt feelings that are searching for a warmer place with good hearts? ...........well written.

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Craig Mize 02 June 2017

This is very well written my friend. I really enjoyed it. My favorite line has to be get burned and be happy spreading the warmth like Sun, to every coldest of the hearts, that might freeze another heart, otherwise! Simply amazing

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Siddartha Montik 02 June 2017

I feel elated reading your comment on my very first Poem which I have written in Blissful times in Berlin. No matter if I breath last in next seconds!

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Siddartha Montik 02 June 2017

Dear Sir Craig, this was my first ever attempt on Poetry.. and had cried several times for the comments I read on this! I never knew when I wrote this Poem in 6 Minutes just because of a simple hurt! I Never felt to edit it as it came good I think So! May be as members said I mettwo poles at same time s Heat and cold! I loved and still like every comment on my this Poem and yours too! ! Bless me Sir that I live next few days! - Siddartha Me!

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Graham Thompson 06 August 2018

I quote Rilke:   Then this is guilt if anything be guilt: not to draw out the freedom in the one you love, with all the freedom we can find in ourselves. We must when we love do this one thing: Release one another, for to hold on to love comes easily, and need not at first be learnt.

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Tariq Al 10 July 2018

A deep and meaningful piece; I presume it is about making do with past experiences to shade light on others and make the world a better place.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 April 2018

Very Powerful! ! ! ! ! Very Moving Poem! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Shyam Soman 07 March 2018

Good work, get burned and be happy! !

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Nudershada Cabanes 27 February 2018

Barren deserts are warm a place to go to when you feel the cold.

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