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Beyond

Rating: 4.9
Go beyond the past.
Go beyond the present..

Will you love me when night
Falls and nordic winds blow
All those drunken eyes out?

When those cleansed people
Wandering through other times
And places, look around aimlessly
In search of some remains of
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Beyond
Sunday, November 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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I wrote this poem in English, originally.

You can read the Italian version 'OLTRE' here:

http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/oltre/



(Fabrizio Frosini)



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COMMENTS
Terry Dawson 22 March 2020
Lovely strands in this great little poem. The course of our lives are seldom clear and we struggle to know which path should be ours or where it will lead to, yet we persevere.
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Unwritten Soul 02 February 2020
Beautiful! beyond the past beyond the present...the opening is a big one " will you love me when..." what directly comes to my mind is to end the poem with: will you love me even after your last breath will this love will be remembered beyond our life May it survive forever
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Fabrizio Frosini 10 February 2020
glad you like my poem 'BEYOND', dear Soul. A good friend's appreciation is a blessing Cheers F.
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Michael Walker 25 September 2019
Quite an intense, dramatic love poem. It has a broad sweep across the past into the present. 'We can't help but go on'-a motto which I have adopted in life.
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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2019
you are ''KINDNESS made a Person'', dear Michael. Thank you
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A B Faniki 07 September 2019
I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing such thoughtful piece.
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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2019
it's truly nice of you. thank you so much
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Michael Walker 17 July 2019
You ask the question that matters: 'Will you love me? ' Life can be hard and unforgiving.
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Fabrizio Frosini 21 July 2019
''Life can be hard and unforgiving'' yes, really...
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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2019
go go, go beyond the everything where the love sang of our unity for everlasting.......///
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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2019
:) thanks for reading
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Captivating piece, raw and honest
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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2019
thank you, Esther! I've answered your msg: truly hope you'll be with us soon :)
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Unnikrishnan E S 23 November 2018
Hi Doctor, Wonderful poem. What was once their souls.... Will you love me when night Falls and nordic winds blow All those drunken eyes out? Great, captivating poetry..No wonder why this magnificent poem is among topmost poems on ph. Well done. Congratulations Doctor. Onto MyPoemList, with full honours
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Fabrizio Frosini 27 November 2018
it's too kind of you, dear Unnikrishnan. Thank you so much. Blessings.
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Fabrizio Frosini 27 November 2018
BTW, your ''No Place Exists in the Universe by That Name'' is truly a very good ''poem of witness''. Congratulations!
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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 11 November 2018
Amazing thought sir....very very beautiful poem.............
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Fabrizio Frosini 17 November 2018
it is very, very kind of you, dear Bhagabat. Thank you
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Pierre Krusketta 10 August 2018
Fab, your poem is number 12 in the Top 500 Member Poems list, and you have 4 poems in the first 12 places! !))) Nocturnal is number 1, Tenderness number 3, You & I number 9, Beyond 12th)))))) GREAT POETRY))
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Fabrizio Frosini 10 August 2018
this is very kind of you, dear PK! gracias
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