Coldness came from the clear.
Beyond the clouds sight of ear.
Playing songs to fill my head.
Raptured hearts full of dread.
Follow beyond the gifted plains.
Into dark shadows, beyond the sane.
Capture the moment of eternal flight.
My soul, your heart, a bitter fight.
Gone from the present story of tomorrow.
I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow.
copyright 1994 POEWHIT
JESUS SAVES
Nice usage of words to describe the feelings in this poem. Emotions are clearly visible in this poem, which is something truly great about this poem of yours.
lovely write...the songs of nature will fill our ears...great
nice; the last two lines are superb. a high thinking person.
well expressed and well said! ! ! ! ! this is very captivating! ! ! ! !
A well written poem the feelings and emotions are very clearly expressed...
Very well written for such idea and it is very nice poem. Reality of human heart and emotion. A bitter fight between love and heart must be judged by mind, guide by faith and rules by God. Excellent and thanks for nice poem.
‘…Capture the moment of eternal flight…. I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow’ Excellent! Splendid! ten dr. sakti
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow.' nicely penned given 10