Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Bidding Farewell

Rating: 4.8
I couldn’t stop my tears,
Cheeks swollen and wet wears,
Stared at the pale face,
Dumb founded as if lost the race?

We had good week end,
Happy time pass and signals send,
Nothing went wrong previous night,
Good happy day without any fight,
She always stood for things right,
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COMMENTS
Alex Nodopaka 08 January 2010
It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.
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warner treuter 25 November 2009
A fitting epitaph. Full of feeling. Must have been a wonderful person.
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warner treuter 25 November 2009
A fitting epitaph. Full of feeling. Must have been a wonderful person.
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warner treuter 25 November 2009
A fitting epitaph. Full of feeling. Must have been a wonderful person.
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Terence Nabbs 18 October 2009
dear hasmukh I don't think there's any think I could say that as not already been said. a beautiful poem. terry
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Catrina Heart 03 October 2009
dear this is such a lovely poem...whole theme almost made me cried.......10/10
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Lillian Thomas 28 September 2009
I am so sorry for your loss. Your grief is palpable. May your whole family find a way to heal.
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 September 2009
A heart felt poem lamenting and praising the loss of the narrator's love one.A good write one...I like this 10 poem.
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Yacov Mitchenko 18 September 2009
This is a touching poem about the narrator's deceased wife. She was highly devoted and diligent. She handled tough situations with poise and decorum. He laments her passing, but at last surrenders to the Almighty. Thank you, sir. Again, some grammatical errors and awkward rhythms occasionally, but nice on the whole.
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Sans Serif 16 September 2009
When someone always stood for the right, you always admire them. and when they die you ask why. Good poem.
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