Holy words to drive off
raised thoughts,
to cut some meanings,
to pour down all the depths,
and to warm our winter within.
Bloom of life
to accompany old songs
hidden in new hymns-
human misery and degradation.
Sufferings to rise up
in the air of shrouded sanctums.
Self-bright sun to descend from
a symbiotic sky, every evening,
to make everything golden-
the rivers, the rivers, the rivers.
Hopes to be carried home,
to be eaten like gold.
Time to be broken,
to be danced in its armor-
by hurricanes, by eternity
towards anarchy and chaos.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Highly imaginative poem nicely executed. Let it be quoted..... Self-bright sun to descend from a symbiotic sky, every evening, to make everything be golden- the rivers, the rivers, the rivers. Hopes to be carried home, Thanks for sharing.
Just marvelous...the title is inspiring...the poem is thoroughly with interesting expressive phrases...old songs hidden in new hymns- human misery and degradation. Sufferings to rise up in the air of shrouded sanctums. Self-bright sun to descend from a symbiotic sky, every evening, to make everything be golden-....great work...thank you Marieta
A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted and well presented. Quot Self - bright sun to descend from a symbiotic sky, every evening, to make everything be golden Quot...beautiful lines from stupendous write.10
Really thought-provoking, Marieta. I will be rereading this tonight to make certain I am on board with this complex and well written poem... And your vocabulary- -stunning, gripping, challenging. You definitely do not deliver baby pablum! 10+
Holy words to warm our winter within, that so rocks with poetic depth! ! ! Awesome!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely thought provoking poem. Reminded me of temple of Sun......God of Nature and God of Man in mutual benediction for us......such great imagery. Thanks Marietta Magls for sharing. Also thanks for your recent comment on my poem.