Birth Day....(my friend's birth day)
shiddath se tha muntazir voh apne janam din ka,
milega kuch aisa thohfa, hoga farhat e jan o dil ka...
baharon ke vo din aakhir khushee khushee aaj aahigaya,
aaya ek lifafa break up likha huva aur tasveer toote huve dil ka....
qismat e bashar salamath, dekho vo kaisey khushee manaye,
youm e viladath jis kee banjaye youm e tafreeq dil ka...
Oh that happens in life. So ironic. Sometimes fate kills our happiness. Beautifully rendered, the pain of separation.
Oh Afsos wali B'day lekin shairi wah khoob, . Very nicely written. Thumbs up again.
Kushiyaan mananey ka vakth aur bhi ayengey Yeh toh sirf vakth ka khel hai bas aagey chaltey jayiye! Beautiful write. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Tute dil se bhi dua'a nikle ye kamaal hai....Behte Ansuon mein bhi khushi chalke ye bemisaal hai Dard hote hue bhi Kisi ki hansi mein sharik hona ye Kabil-e-Taareef hai....10++
A shocking birthday but fruitful as it inspired to write such a lovely poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
See, how happiness is celebrated and during break up this still gives little sorrow. Birthday brings happiness and still we wish all the best. Wishing your friend and you a very happy birthday. Wisely penned poem this is...10
thank you V much mr. Mahakul.