Bits Of Life! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Bits Of Life!

Rating: 5.0


Crawl into my shoes
To taste the bitter-sweet
Bits of life
Your cowardice
Will let you
Stow away
Into your
Self obsessed cocoon.


© Aarzoo Mehek

Bits Of Life!
Thursday, July 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: bittersweet love,cocoon,coward,life,obsession
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticize them you'll be a mile away, and you'll have their shoes!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

I would invite you to read my poems (I have five so far) but I am a new poet and Poem Hunter has not activated them yet. Some were posted three days ago. I wonder how long it will take to activate them...? I am very surprised. I thought people would be able to read my poems as soon as I posted them!

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 July 2020

Have to be free From the obsession! ! !

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It is essential to be in others shoes to be aware of their sorrows and joys it needs love supported by courage.Meaningful poem.....10

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 July 2020

Thank you toato my friends for the beautiful feedback. Iam facing a glitch as Iam not able to acknowledge the feedback nor Iam able to see the feedbacks immediately.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2020

Bitterness! ! Facing the odds of love and life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 05 July 2020

Pain of betrayal is everlasting, nevertheless one cannot have status quo and need to move on...A fantastic poem.10+++

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M Asim Nehal 04 July 2020

Painful truth of this life, those to whom we surrender often runs away taking our innocence. Keep away from such narrow minded self-centered people around. Wonderful poem with profound message.Loved it.

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